Script


 UNFRIENDED

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(title sequence)

(Scene 1)

Girl scrubbing blood off floor and hands 

(studio name BERRY STUDIOS…)

(scene 2)

putting knives back.

(production company FOUR GIRLS PICTURES…)

(scene 3)

Girl opens Instagram

(actors and crew VIOLET ROBERTS AND DARA SEDAKA…)

(scene 4)

 scrolls through her following.

(Film Title…UNFRIENDED)

(Scene 5)

 Clicks on one and examines her posts 

(Music by …)

(Scene 6)

then messages her asking to hang out.

(edited by… SIENA PANCERA)

(Scene 7)

Other girl replies “sure!”

(Produced by… PARKER MERRICK)

(Scene 8)

Shows the girls face

(Story by… Dara Sedaka and Violet Roberts)

Establishing shot of city

(scene 9)

(written by… DARA SEDAKA)

(scene 10)

Two girls sitting at table

(Scene 11)

Skylar: Thank you so much, I had so much fun!

Naomi: Of course, it was great catching up.

(scene 12)

Walking on street

Skylar: You know, I feel bad that we never really spoke in high school.

Naomi: Oh no it's fine, really.

Skylar: yeah but it's not, (sigh) me and my friends treated you horribly. And now Ava has gone missing, I guess it’s kind of like karma. 

Naomi: I've been meaning to bring that up, I'm sorry. I figured it must've hit close to home knowing how close you two were. Have you heard anything from her family?

Skylar: Not more than anyone else. They’re all in shambles you know. 

Naomi: Yeah, figures. 

Ominous music

(Scene 13)

News channel playing in the background

Skylar on the couch, Naomi in the kitchen

News reporter: (news music start)Ava Smith found dead. Brutally stabbed 13 times after being reported missing two days prior. No leads on the murderer yet. Stay tuned for an updated police report. (news music end)

Shows Naomi looking suspicious

Skylar: God I can’t believe someone would do that. I don't understand why. She was a nice girl.

Naomi laughs

Naomi: Yeah, you never know who you can trust these days.

Camera pans to Naomi holding a knife.

Ominous music playing

(Directed by… SIENA MERRICK)






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